(Disclaimer:
I'll try to make this short . . .
I feel I must have a disclaimer to tell everyone what my idea for this blog is. It's getting to the point where there are a lot of posts and I fear the idea of the blog is getting lost. I am a young writer and I'm still trying to learn this art. Like any art I love to hear constructive criticism about my work, which is why I am posting my earliest drafts of my writing. Some of these drafts I have only looked over once or twice at best, and they may not be the very best I can do, but nevertheless, I want to show them off.
I'm looking for constructive
criticism while I'm working. I am also trying to show everyone my
progress as I grow as an artist. Being an artist of any kind takes a
lot of work and time to make your craft perfect. And I want to show
everyone that a man with a learning disability and dyslexia can be a
writer. I may not be the greatest writer in the world and I'm alright
with that, but I can be a writer who inspires people to create. Even
if I only inspire one person to become an artist, I want to inspire
them because my friends and family have done that for me. They have
never given up on me and I want to show them the gifts that God has
given me.
So with that said, I hope you enjoy
my work. I would love to hear your ideas on what you would do to make
the writing better. Also, if a draft get removed it's because I'm
working on it or I feel like it doesn't need to be on my blog
anymore. Thank you for your time, I know reading can take a while. So
I thank you again.
With a handshake,
Chase L. Currie)
The Night the Moon got Lost
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By: Chase L. Currie
To: Leanna King
My feet hurt; which is easy to explain
why, since I have been standing on them for hours at a time today. I
stand on them, smiling as people come and go at the place I work.
Even if the people I smile at snarl at me or say rude remarks to me.
I keep smiling because I have to; it's a part of the job.
I don't truly enjoy my job nor do I
really enjoy the money I make from it. Money after all is the root of
all evil, or so I've been told, and sometimes, I understand why they
say that. I hate money. I hate it more than I hate the smell of my
shoes after I take them off from standing on them for hours. I seem
to never have enough money but I have enough stress and needs to keep
me standing around for hours to make it.
The truth is if I could be somewhere
else, I would be. I’d rather not be at my job, which just seems to
not pay me enough to put up with the rude people. Sure, I can pay the
bills but that’s all I can do. My check hits my bank account and in
a flash all my money seems to be gone. I look at it with a smile as
the number in my account slowly counts down to zero, again, my smile
fades. I wonder where all that evil is going? I hope I’m not
funding some terrorist cell I don't know about.
I'm sure you are asking yourself, if
I can pay your bills, what more do I need? I need to be
enthusiastic about my job. I need to not only pay the bills, but I
need to love what I am doing. However, the sad truth of it all is I'm
not. Not happy, not enthusiastic, with my job and my life. I think,
like so many of us, I'm a little lost.
When I feel this overwhelming drag of
my current state of feeling lost, I do one thing and one thing only.
I pack a pipe, step outside, and look up at the sky. I watch the
stars and the moon thinking to myself how lovely Heaven looks. How
great it feels to be alone in the dark with my thoughts and my pipe.
What more could I ask for? Maybe a chair.
As I reach the door, on this night, I
notice something different. There is a light coming from the other
side. I knew it was a full moon out, the best time to star gaze, but
this light was brighter, pale but brighter than normal. I looked over
to the switch which controls the light over the deck and it was off.
I was not sure where this light could be coming from. Maybe it was
the neighbor shining a flashlight at the door or maybe, there was a
car in the driveway.
But the light, it was so pale.
I open the door, slowly; to make sure
it isn't aliens. I've never meet an alien before and only seen movies
about them. If you have not been to the movies lately then you might
not know, but aliens are bad. All they want to do is kill us or
destroy the world or put stuff in places we don't want them to. So
I'm sure you can understand where my fear is coming from.
I step out onto the old wooden deck.
The wood announcing to the world I was now outside. I was here and no
matter where I walk, everyone would know it. I just hope the
neighbors weren't sleeping with their windows open.
As I looked for the light, it was easy
to find. The light was sitting in one of the chairs outside. I stood
there for a moment, rubbing my eyes, keeping my pipe in my mouth. I
blinked a couple of time. I wasn't too sure why I made myself blink
more than once. Everyone seems to do it in movies and books when
there is something in front of them they can’t believe they are
seeing.
I blinked and I still couldn't believe
it. The moon was sitting in my chair, smoking a pipe, looking a
little disoriented.
“Hmmm . . .” I started to say. I
wasn’t sure what word would fall from my lips next. What do you say
to the moon? I couldn't yell at him for being in my chair. Even if he
wasn't supposed to be and was supposed be in the sky. I didn't even
know the moon was a ‘him’. I've always read it as being a ‘her’,
this was news to me. And even more news to me was the moon smokes a
pipe. So I ask the only thing I could, “Do you have a light?”
I left my lighter inside and I was not
about to go back in for it.
“Oh sure,” said the moon, handing
me his lighter.
“May I?” I ask, taking the lighter
and pointing at a chair next to him.
“Oh, by all means,” he said back
to me, moving his legs so I could sit down. I sat beside the moon,
lighting the tobacco in my pipe, taking in the smoke slowly, watching
the cherry burning bright. I had to make sure I did it just right so
the cherry would sit for a while in the pipe and I could pull the
smoke for a good bit.
“Thank you,” I said handing his
lighter back. I looked up to make sure the moon wasn't in the sky and
the spot where it should be was black. The moon was, for a fact,
sitting on my deck.
“I love your pipe,” he said.
“Thanks,” I reply. “My sister
and my brother-in-law got it for me in Turkey. Apparently, the more I
smoke from it, the darker the stone will turn.” He eyes the Arabian
looking face on the front of the pipe seeing the stone still being a
bright white. Then he smiles a little, not saying a word, and turns
back to studying the area in which he was in.
“So, hmmm . . . what you doing down
here?” I ask, letting the smoke pour from my mouth.
“I am a little lost,” he replies.
“Where are you trying to get to?”
I ask him.
“I'm trying to get to the Queen's
building,” he told me, looking over at me, smiling. “I have
someone I have to meet there.”
“Oh, well, lucky for you,” I said
back, smiling as well, “you are not too far away from uptown. I can
take you there if you like? It’s only about a twenty minute or so
drive.”
“That’s good to know,” he said
sitting back. “But I'm in no rush, I have time to kill.”
“So who do you have to meet there?”
I ask quickly followed by a short statement. “If you don't mind me
asking.” I know it's rude to pry into someone else’s’ business
but it's not every night you get to meet the moon. I had to know who
he was meeting. I wonder if it is an angel or the devil or God or
aliens.
“The sun,” he said and the light
around him brightens. “I can't wait to see her.”
“The sun is a ‘her’?”
“Ah yes, she is and she is the most
lovely thing I've ever set my eyes on,” he said, smiling, looking
up. “She is greater than all the stars in Heaven.”
“Are you and her, you know,” I
asked leaning in, “together?”
“We are,” he said looking over at
me. I could see it in his eyes, love. The kind of love you only read
about or only see once in your life. The love you see and you can't
help but be envious of. You wish, you knew what it was like. Because
the kind of love that sits in his eyes makes all the other love you
felt in your past fall short. And you wonder what that kind of real
love feels like. I try to stop my heart for longing for that kind of
love. I try to fight back the envy in my eyes. I was sure he saw it
but I smile, because seeing that kind of love made me believe that
one day I could have it. One day we all can have it.
“I see her rise and fall each and
every day, “ the moon told me. “I chase after her and I long for
her.” The love never fades from his eyes. “It's a game we are
doomed to play forever. We run from each other to never hold one and
another; it's the rules of fate. But - - -” he lift his a hand,
taking his pipe from his lip. “Once a year we are allowed to have a
few hours with each other. Once a year we are allowed to hold each
other and that is tonight.”
“Oh wow,” I yell jumping to my
feet. “Is she waiting for you right now? We should get going; we
don't want to miss her.” Look, I can’t tell you why I was so
happy for him. He said his short story to me and my heart jumped for
joy. My heart wanted them to have every moment of every second with
each other. I couldn't for the life of me understand why he was
sitting around waiting. I couldn't understand why he wasn’t jumping
to his feet, leaping into my truck and speeding down the road to the
sun. I couldn't understand.
“Sit back down,” he calmly said
waving his hand for me to do so. “She’s not there yet and I like
the wait. To tell you the truth I'm a little afraid of being with her
again.”
“Why?” I ask sitting back down. I
move the pipe from one corner of my lips to the other, pulling in
some more smoke. “Why would you be afraid of seeing her?”
He laughs and I wasn't sure what was
funny. Was there a joke somewhere in the world he heard but I didn't?
Or maybe he was laughing because I didn't understand him. But the
laugher faded and he started to say, “I dream about her every
night. I dream about the way she smells, the way her skin is a
burning warmth to the touch and her eyes are bright and gold. I dream
about every time I touch her, she giggles a little or when I kiss
her, she always adds a little kiss after a long one. She grins,
holding my face with both her hands before we kiss each time. I dream
about this every night. And yet, I'm afraid she won't live up to my
dreams, how funny is that?”
It's not funny at all. In fact, it's a
very bad joke but I seem to understand where he is coming from. I
didn't know how to tell him I understood. You build someone up in
your mind. You dream about them every night for days, weeks, almost a
year. You play little plays in your head with them and when you get
the chance to act those plays, you freeze. What if everything you
scripted goes wrong? What if they aren't the person you thought they
were? What if they changed? And for a moment you can't face them. You
step back and you tell yourself the dream, the actor is better.
I understand the joke, I just don't
think it's very funny but I understood.
My laugh tells him I feel a little sad
for his fear and then I ask, “Does the sun taste like an orange?”
So it wasn't uplifting like it should have been, but it was the only
thing that came to my mind.
The moon chuckles and said, “Kind
of, she taste like an orange cream popsicle.”
“Man, I would make out with her the
whole time.”
He laughed again. “I don't dream
about that,” he said. “I mean, I know what she tastes like but
it's never the same in my dreams.” He looks over at me, thinking
for a moment. “In my dreams she doesn't really act like herself,
you know?”
“Not at all,” I said, smiling.
“I've never met the sun before.”
“Right, right,” he replies, waving
away my sarcastic comment. “She’s a wildfire. You never know what
she going to do or what she’s going to say. Sometimes, she dances
for hours in my light and then other times she throws fire balls at
you for the hell of it.”
“Sounds a little painful.”
“Nah, it's kind like a snowball,
just with fire,” he tells me. “But she never acts that way in my
dreams. She acts different in my dreams like she’s not real or
something.”
“Sounds like a good reason to go and
see her.” And that was hitting the nail on the head. We don't want
people to be like the actors in our heads because if they did, it
wouldn't be them. We want someone to be themselves and not the
version of what we see them as.
He stood up, looking around and then
asks me, “Which way?”
“I can take you,” I told him. I
wasn't about to miss seeing what the sun looked like when she came to
earth. And who doesn't want the moon riding in their truck? We
climbed into my truck and off we went. I pulled up to the stop sign
near my house and beside me was a cop, who looked dumbfounded to see
the moon sitting in the passenger seat. We waved at him and he
blinked a couple of times as I drove away. The cop didn't follow for
I was sure he was sitting there still not sure what he just saw.
I jumped on 485 as I put my foot down
harder. The truck screamed down the road and the moon held his head
out laughing as we went. “This is great!” He yelled back at me. I
just pushed the speed up some more making the wind beat harder
against his face. He just laughed more.
Finally after about ten minters of the
moon acting like a dog he pulled his head back into the cab. His hair
shooting wildly off the side of his head and for the first time I
understood how everyone else saw me when I came up to them without my
hair done. I smile, knowing I was never going to tell anyone how
stupid I look.
I hate combing my hair so much.
“I wish we had cars in the sky,”
he said,
“It's not bad,” I tell him, “but
driving sometimes gets old.”
“Couldn't imagine how.”
We sat in silence for a few moments
and then he asked me, “What are your dreams?” He asks as he
looked up at the sky, at all the stars, thinking about what tomorrow
would bring him. His eyes yelling the same thing mine has done so
many times before. How do I make my life work?
“Well, last night I had a dream I
found a dollar,” I said, trying to keep my eyes on the road and not
him. “And then I knew someone out there was dreaming they lost a
dollar.”
“Wrong kind of dream.”
“Ah,” I quietly reply, “I have
many dreams but the big ones, is that what you want to know about?”
“I want to know the dreams that
drives your life. The ones you wake up for everyday and you tell
yourself every step forward or backward is for those dreams,” he
said, never looking over at me.
“Right. I was afraid so,” I said,
sighing. “I dream of . . . a simple life, I like to think. I want
to teach art. I want to paint for me. I want to write books and sell
one or two. I want to have a wife with a house, somewhere off the
beaten path. I want to make love to her every night. I want to see
the world with her and then I want to spend the later part of my life
in the mountains. With my wife and I writing, painting and playing
with our grandchildren all summer. A simple life, a simple dream.”
“A lovely dream,” he said, looking
over at me with a grin on his face. “Do you feel like you are close
to having it?”
“Not at all,” I told him with a
smile on my face. “I'm so far from that dream I can't even see it
anymore. I keep waiting for it to start and then I have to keep
telling myself it has.”
“Would you compromise your dreams?”
“I hope not,” I said. “I know as
I grow up, I'll change but I would hope, I would never lose them. I
know, I won't because I fear losing them so much. I know, I might
have to compromise the way I get to them but I'll always have them.”
I keep my eyes on the road, the
headlights playing against the ground. I think only about the lights
and the road. I don't see the cars beside me or the people eying the
moon. I keep looking down the hood of my truck into the lights,
hoping as I speed down the road it is the path forward to my dreams.
“I've seen so many people in my life
compromise or give up or stop on their dreams. I get so angry with
them for it. I fight to not be like them and every time I wake up
alone or poor or still in the same bed, I feel like I am them. Every
time I write and post something online I feel like a fool and a
loser. I feel like my dreams are just that . . . dreams,” I confess
to him.
“But you keep going, right? You keep
trying to reach for your dreams,” he said, leaning over to me.
“I do,” I said. “I fear giving
up but I won't give up because who knows what might happen. I might
wake up one day and my dreams have come true. Or I might wake up and
keep having to reach for them. But I will never, I mean NEVER, give
up on them.”
“Good,” he said, sitting back,
looking up at the sky. “That’s what I wanted to hear.”
“What about you, what are your
dreams?” I ask, not too sure if the moon has dreams or not.
“My one and only dream is to live a
life with the sun,” he said, smiling as we enter downtown. I
slowed, and looked around but I could tell he knew where we were. He
could feel the heat from the sun and I turn down North Tryon heading
for the bright light down the street. He looked out the window as I
pulled up to the front of the Queen's building. And there, standing
with her hands behind her was the sun. Her hair reaching down to the
ground, burning a warm blonde and then fading into a raging red.
My eyes didn't hurt, like they should
have. She lessens her power, the brightness of her will. She stood
there for a moment, eying her lover, smiling from ear to ear. I'm not
sure she even saw me.
The moon slowly got out of the truck,
thanked me and turned just in time for the sun to jump into his arms.
They kissed like the long lost lovers they are. She winked at me,
thanked me, and they stepped up to the top of the building. I sat
there in my truck for a few moments, looking up at the building,
seeing the moon and the sun dance. I sat there until I saw the cop
pull up behind me and then I drove away, knowing the moon has had his
dream for just a moment.
The Lion in the Sky
By: Chase L. Currie
“I love you . . .”
I have always loved you, even though
you do not know who I am, I still love you. I have seen you every
night as you wish on me many times. I smile down at you when you wish
for silly things. I cry with you when you wish for a moment of peace
in a life falling down around you. I wish onto you the same thing you
wish to me. I wish I could touch you, smell you, and kiss you, but I
cannot. It might be because of fate or the way the rules of life are
written. It might be because you are so far below me and I am so high
in the sky. I don't know why. I do not care why because all I do is
wish for you.
And so as it might be I am doomed to
never sit beside you. I watch in horror as the passing nights come
and go and you fall deeper into your darkness. Until this very night,
at the bottom of your wine bottle, you cry out for me. Cry out the
wish all lovers make.
I pull at my cage. I reach for you. I
fight to break free and I fall to the world to save your life.
I sit my place on the ground next to
you. Your face is hiding behind your hands trying to stop the rushing
flood of tears. I sit beside you in still silence, my big golden eyes
fixated on your long brown hair. How do you manage to make your body
seem so small? Your knees in your chest and your arms wrapped around
them as you cry your pain away. You seem so tiny to me, it would take
nothing for me to carry you away. And trust me when I say I gave it
some thought.
Finally, after I made slight sound you
left your head and your blue eyes fill with shock. “There is a lion
next to me,” you said, although I am sure it was to me. You might
have been talking to yourself. You had to tell yourself what you were
really seeing. “A lion with blue and white fur,” you told
yourself. It is a shock and I understand. After all you have never
really seen a lion before, not a blue and white that is.
I smile as a lion can smile, “I am
much more than a lion, my love,” I said.
“And you can speak . . .” Your
voice said filling with fear but at the same time my ears have never
heard something so beautiful. I have heard the singing of angels and
yet, your voice moves my heart to tears. I wanted to cry but I did
not. A lion is strong and a crying lion . . . is, well, something no
one wants to see.
“I can,” I reply. Your feet move,
telling me you want to jump away. You want to run through the woods,
screaming for your life but you didn't. A part of you believes if you
didn't run than I wouldn't eat you. The beast part of me wouldn't see
it as a game if you didn't run. But the other part of you knew
sitting still didn't matter much either. If the beast part of me was
strong than I would eat you anyways.
“I will not eat you,” I said, as
you scooted away from me every so often, hoping I wouldn't notice. I
stood up, putting my face next to your while saying, “I am not that
kind of lion.”
“What kind of lion are you?”
“Not a real one,” I said and you
could hear or feel I wasn't breathing. I didn't need to breathe
because I was not a part of this world.
“Then what are you?” A fair
question as your body relaxed a little. If I wasn't a real lion then
I couldn't eat you. Although, if I was you, I would wonder if I was a
demon or an angel. But then again you don't believe in those things,
do you?
“I am,” I said looking up at the
sky, where the little star should be. You know the one, the one you
wish on. “Someone who always listens to you but never talks back.”
“Are you?” You question, raising
an eye brow but the answer was easy to see, so you did not ask it.
“Can I touch you?” You ask instead.
“By all means,” I said and you
reached out touching my cold fur. I smile and my fur becomes warmer
like hot running water, you continued to pet me.
“Why did you come down here for me?”
You ask, your voice creaking from the overwhelming feeling of joy
mixed with a tad bit of sadness. Sadness, I believe you felt because
no one else can wish on me if I am on earth with you.
“You wish for someone to be here
with you,” I said, as you stop petting me, looking me in the eyes.
“And I wish to be that person.”
“I wish for someone I could love,”
you said, “someone who would never leave me. A person who knew what
they wanted and what they wanted was me. Me, and nothing more. We
could wake up every morning holding each other, then have some tea
together and need nothing else in life. That is what I wished for. I
can't wake up with a lion. I don't even know if a lion can drink
tea.”
“Well,” I reply, keeping the smile
on my face, “if you had a really big bed I could wake up with you
and I really do love tea.”
The grin across your red lips made me
wish for you to smile. I could only imagine what your smile must look
like. I was sure it would send me into tears of joy. What more could
I ask for then to see the person I love smile? There are no greater
joys on Earth or in Haven then a smile from a loved one.
“My bed is not that big,” You
jokingly said.
“Ah, yes, but here I am now and you
are not alone.”
“I guess I am not, huh?” You said,
looking up at the sky. “What is it like up there?”
I followed your head and studied the
sky, seeing the spot where I should be. “It's big,” I said. “So
big it's easy to get lost. You forget there are other people out
there. You look around and all you can see is darkness until you look
down and beneath your eyes is a world full of burning lights. A world
of people looking back at you, whispering all kind of dreams to you.
So you smile and you wish,” I look back down at you, “to make
every one of those wishes come true.”
“But you can't make them all come
true,” you told me with a hint of a pessimistic tone.
“I made this one come true, didn't
I?”
You rolled your head over to me as I
lie down. You fall to the ground beside me, studying my eyes, my
head, my powerful body. “Why me then? Why did you come all the way
down here for me?” You ask.
“Because,” I said, “I love you.
I've always loved you.”
“How?” You ask. “You don't even
know me.”
“I wouldn't say that,” I reply. “I
remember when you were six and you wish you could have a puppy and
the next weekend your father got you one. I remember the first kiss
you had under the moon light, you were eleven. Then I remember when
you wished for me to make the pain in your chest go away, a boy just
broke up with you, after you gave him everything you had. And I
remember when you made love on the roof in Paris while you were
spending a year there. And that man wasn't even your boyfriend. You
see, I have been with you all your life. I have watched you,
understood you, and believed in you. I have loved you more then you
know, then anyone else.”
“But I know nothing about you.”
“What do you need to know? Other
than the fact I want to love you and I just ask you do the same thing
back,” I said to you, as the smile fades from my lips, your eyes
said unspeakable things to me. You were lost in my words, wishing to
believe them but the blackness in you said not to. It whispers to
you, telling you I was a liar. My words were dark lies and you should
not fall for them. You smile but I could not tell if the smile was a
lie or not.
“You have always loved me,” you
said, “but will you always do so?”
“I will,” I told you. “There is
no deed you can commit which will rip my love from you. I may not
always be happy with the action you chose to take but I will always
love you.”
“I don't know,” you said sitting
up. “That is a tall order to fill.”
“Might I remind you,” I grin. “You
are talking to a blue lion from the stars. You have no idea what
orders I can fill.”
“Fair enough. So what do we tell
people when I walk around with you?”
I sit up, looking up at the stars, not
wishing to tell you what will happen but I must. So I speak the words
that will fill you with sadness, a sadness that cuts at me like knife
against my flesh. “When the sun rises, I will return to the sky,”
I told you, not looking at your eyes.
“So you're going to leave me?”
“I must do so,” I said.
You shot to your feet, throwing your
hands to your side, and tears rushing down your face. “You're going
to leave me alone! Alone, again! You out of everyone know how much I
fear being locked inside myself. You know how much I need someone
like you in my life. So why did even show yourself, if you're just
going to leave me, like everyone else?”
I understand it was the wine talking
but it did not make it any easier to hear. Your words cut deeper than
they should. “I am leaving you because I have to,” I said. “Those
are the rules, but know I am waiting for you. Every night, I will
return to this spot. Every night, I will drop from the Heavens to be
by your side. And you must understand I will never truly leave you. I
will always be here.”
“How do I know you are not lying?”
“You don't know that,” I said,
looking up at you with all the belief in me. Hoping you can see that
I am telling you the truth. “You'll just have to have faith in me.”
“I don't have faith in people
anymore,” you scream at me.
“But I'm not a person, I'm a lion.”
You smile and the smile was the
brightest thing I have ever seen. You smile because you understood
the joke and the fact it was true. I was like no other person on
Earth because I wasn't of Earth. When I gave you my word I meant it.
I am going to return to you every night.
You sat down beside me, putting your
arm around me, petting me. We talked the night away. I told you about
more stars. You told me about what your life was like during the day.
We talked until the sun came up and I returned home.
I waited for the next night and went
down to the world, but you were not there. The boy who broke your
heart the very night we met was sitting at your house when you return
home. You fell back in love with him; the kiss was hard and long. You
stepped in to your house, shutting the door, falling for him again.
You never came back to me but I still
waited because I love you and I will always be here for you. I will
never step away from you because I know, you will always need me. It
may only be for a couple of hours. It may only be to cry on my
shoulder when life is falling part. I understand that and I
understand your smile, your laugh and your love is for someone else
and I am just a wishing star. But I will always be here because for
you. Because you always have another wish to tell me. And . . .
I love you . . .
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